by Mira Grant (pen name for Seanan McGuire)
438pp, Orbital, 2017
(looks like it's free as an audiobook this week!)
This is a tale I’ve been hoping for for a long time – a great,
epic marine creature novel. It tops most competitors in science,
characterization, plot, and/or writing skill, and that makes it one satisfying read.
Many authors have tried to turn mermaids into believable
creatures, and some have done it well, but no one’s done it like this. The
science, the “casting,” and the plot here are almost perfect.
First is my primary interest, the science. There are two
aspects here, the marine science/technology and the mermaids (or “sirens”). I’m
a science writer, and I do a lot of open-source research in my day job, and the
work that went into this just blew me away. The research ship Melusine has been custom-built by the Imagine
Network to follow up on the mysterious events on their much smaller ship, the Atargatis,
over the Mariana Trench. Bits of video on the internet from the Atargatis
appear to show some kind of amphibious creatures vaulting onto the ship,
leaving nothing but a blood-stained derelict.
The Melusine has everything possibly needed for finding, studying, capturing, and/or killing new
creatures, although most of the scientists aboard don’t expect mermaids:
they’re piggybacking on that mission to do a multitude of studies on this patch
of the Pacific, from the surface to the Challenger Deep. Cryptozoologist Luis Martines
is one who does think they’ll find something, as does his research partner, marine
biologist Jillian Toth, whose academic reputation has been pretty much wrecked
by her belief in such creatures. The ship and scientists are described so
well you think you’re on board, although I’d be interested in a diagram of the
very complex vessel.
Once they get to their search area, things start
getting weird. A fatal submersible descent, a crewman yanked over the side, and
a bizarre range of sonar and hydrophone readings indicate the mermaids are real,
although some of their actions seem inexplicable. Naturally, everyone from the
network stays focused entirely on delivering good TV. Then come more documented
(sometimes fatal) close encounters. Things get really fun here as the author
details the rivalry between different scientists with different motivations
(some scientific and some very personal), disciplines, and methods, who nearly
come to blows over who gets what sample and whose theories make more
sense.
Then the fun is over, as the mermaids decide this weird floating
reef full of edible creatures merits an all-out attack. (One aside here: The expedition
has research dolphins, and I think the author overreaches in giving them
intelligence fully equal to humans, from deal-making to long-range planning to
philosophy. But this is a novel about mermaids, after all, so go with it.)
Now we get into the mermaids/sirens. They are nothing you’d
expect from Walt Disney. The ancestry, anatomy, and capabilities of the predatory
creatures are thoroughly explored, and it all makes sense. They are
almost too perfect, too capable both in body and brains, but McGuire makes you
believe. Again, the research involved simply makes my head hurt. Some
things done really well in this section. One is linguistics, as the humans try voice and
sign language and attempt to decipher the mermaids' communications,
with a clever nod to a famous Star Trek: TNG episode. Another is the appearance
of two very intriguing humans, a pair of unethical but superb big-game hunters
who describe themselves as “throwbacks” and think everyone else on board is
useless, except maybe as bait. As scientists try to find answers and
security plans and equipment (believably) go to hell, the tension goes up and
up and up. There was only one spot, about 75% through the novel, where the
details of who reported to who and who hated who got a little dense, but it
didn’t last. I was on board to the end. I stayed up late to finish this, and
for a guy with serious sleep problems and a need for a careful routine, that’s
saying something.
McGuire, it should be noted, does not stint on the violence here—and
a couple of scenes involving toxins are really yucky—but there’s nothing that
feels shoveled in to appeal to violence-lovers. The sex/romance is likewise
only what’s needed, with a lot of allusions but only one love affair being even
PG-rated.
I’m not calling this book THE definitive marine creature
thriller, since I thought there were a few minor flaws, and because someone can
always come along and top even a very impressive accomplishment. But the
science here is excellent, all the characters are interesting, and the
creatures are very cool. I had some reservations on whether the sirens
would develop the intelligence level they have or be able to find enough large
prey, but McGuire is aware of these issues and does the best she can to keep the
plausibility level high. She also works in intriguing ideas on everything from
deafness to evolution, never preaching but letting the characters speak in ways
that make sense.
If you want a novel that’s all slam-bang creature action, or a
tight little thriller like Jaws, this isn’t it. This is a complex novel
that’s creates its own very believable reality and maintains it, and that is
high praise.
Note to cryptozoology friends: if you're considering a purchase, the author is
very sympathetic to cryptozoology, both in this novel and elsewhere – she went
on Twitter recently to state her belief the thylacine still exists. (She also, when we've met a conferences, loved my Dubnjkleostus collection, so I'm not unbiased. Trust me, though. This is a crypto-epic done right.